A story cline shows tension building up until it reaches the top. Then it starts falling down. The title is Finding mum in this story there is a big story cline. There is a boy who loses his mother in a supermarket he looked everywhere for his mother but he could not find her so he thought hard very hard so he walked back to were he lost his mum and there she was. Did you see how the tension built up? In the beginning he felt a little bit worried in the middle he felt lonely and finally he found MUM ( at the end) he felt very happy and relieved. You try writing a story cline one day. By Max, Lachlan and Hamish
3 comments:
I like these graphs.
by lewis T
I think this is a wonderful learning tool that can be utilised to reflect on learning that has accured in the classroom.
Hello Max, Lachlan and Hamish
What a great way to talk about a story! How will you use that information to improve your story writing? I would be interested to see your next story.
Dr Potaka
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