Our Writing

We are learning to write a story that people want to read.
We wanted to make our first line interesting to make people want to keep on reading. Here are some of our first lines. I wonder what will happen next ...

Mysterious screeching coming out of nowhere. Sam C
“Screech” “Alright what was that?" Then I burst back in fright. By Lewis
On one Sunday morning I was reading a story in my bedroom. By Lachlan
I woke up ready to pounce. Sarah C
Yesterday it was my birthday. By Georgia
In the fantastic holidays Dad drove me to Cable Bay. By Stella
In the hot holidays I hiked to the hairdresser. By Mai
I woke up and boom! By Tarrin